Saturday, September 16, 2006

Silence took over

Ok, now I must post something. I'm facing a blogger's block. Which actually is another way of saying, I'm getting bored of blogging. This is one of many tragic flaws I've discovered in me: I'm never at peace, I keep looking for some changes, I really hate monotonousness. I'm really excited when I'm going to new places and I'm really pissed off if I've to repeat myself. I'm really pissed off right now, because I wrote this post and then I pressed that spell check waala button and it wiped off everything :( . But its not that bad coz I'm writing new things now. I'm also getting digressed.......

I've come back to my reading habits thesedays and since multi-tasking is not my cup of tea, I'm not able to write blogs. Soon, I'll be bored of reading and will come back to writing. Its a cycle which keeps the energy flowing and gives another reason for me to live on. So, since I'm not able to find anything interesting to write and I don't want more hate mails for my last post, I'm posting this poem I wrote a long time back:

A million times I did it over,
like crazy I practiced on the mirror,
wherever I go , whatever I did,
It remained in back of my mind,
And when the moment came,
The silence took over.

I can vividly remember,
That glass-house and that November,
We waited for that unseasoned shower,
I wasted a complete hour,
when the downpour turned to drizzle,
I gathered my courage to utter,
She looked at me with her ever-smiling eyes,
And the silence took over.

The white layout of that ward,
To look at her white face was hard,
her hand in my hand ,
I stared at those ever-smiling eyes,
Suddenly the look in her eyes faded,
as if she got a clue,
I said I love you.
And the silence took over...


12 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice....my fav till now on ur blog i'd say

dizzy...:)

Anonymous said...

who who what what...

-Abhishek S

Anonymous said...

good 1.

Harshpreet Singh said...

Mast likha hai sir jii ...

Bahut hi tashan

Phoenix said...

Beautiful!
Just like silence itself...

shweta said...

nd u called me a romantic in ur last post errr...!!!...
meandering in ur thots ...gud hai ....a nice way to string things up ...!!!

Anonymous said...

monotonousness : should be monotonicty

otherwise a superb (fadoo) piece of writing

KT said...

hmm porm to achchhi hai sir ji ...

yaar par yeh poem likhne ka funda kya hai mujhe bhi samjhaana kabhi.. jaise tu multi tasking nahin kar paata main poem nahin likh paata....


ek poem likhi maine apne blog par ...kisi ko samajh hi nahin aai ,... :((

Anonymous said...

The best one till date for sure ... and so truly said .... and the silence took over .... !!!

Shailabh

Aydee said...

so in response to ur comment....cuz i only write when im sad for the most part....

AA said...

Your posts are well written and interesting. Its hard to find this particular combination.

Since your last post is dated sept 2006, it seems that you have stopped blogging. Pity. I would enjoyed following the adventures of jack sparrow and the black pearl :) .

AA said...

there seems to be some problem with your script. the latest post is not readable.

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